Credit: Ratna Pochiraju
Vibrant
Gathered around
A circle full of
life
With no ending or
beginning
Let’s live
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Note: The poem is written in Cinquain style with 2-4-6-8-2 syllables in each line respectively.
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Beautiful life in few words
ReplyDeleteThank you, Monika :)
DeleteOh I love it! Lovely poem, and nice rythm.
ReplyDeleteF is for Free motion
My knowledge of the technical aspects of poetry is zilch. I just reel off verses as they come to my mind. That is a beautiful technically perfect poem you have written.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jai :) I have a special love for shape poetry. Just don't ask me to use meters though. I'm horrible at it.
DeleteLeaves and life make good poetry.
ReplyDeleteThey do, don't they? :D
DeleteThank you for reading, TM. :)
Ok, the technicality of writing poems is Greek to me. But it was fun to check the syllable count for each line as mentioned by you in the note.
ReplyDeleteHaha... That's the fun part of these poems. The syllables can cause of quite a bit of trouble.
DeleteThank you for reading. :)
This is short and full of life! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you, P :D
DeleteI am not sure why comment at times goes as Unknown.
ReplyDeleteTrust blogspot to do that. :/
DeleteSay no more.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Keith. :)
Deletewow..even in a full length article, I can't someup life in such a beautiful manner. Life is full of shades but there is no end...lets live is the notion for all.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Alpana. :)
DeleteI like the way the first and last lines of the poem are so powerful. Weekends In Maine
ReplyDeleteProfound and beautiful!!Describing the circle of life in just a few words....and I love the positivity:)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ira :)
DeleteBeautiful cinquain! The painting and your poem captured the concept of life so well. Been meaning to find your AtoZ and landed here only today!
ReplyDeleteThe poem is beautiful for its ability to give a message despite its simplicity.
ReplyDeleteThat painting though is surreal. WOW!!!