This blog includes my poems, translations and some random thoughts...
Aww, cute kids :) I wonder how many they ate before the mom revealed her presence.
Thank you :) May be 3-4. Mom wouldn't want them to fall sick, right? :)
“But I want one cookie.”Isn't it always the way? Always with the feeding!
Yeah! I am the same :)
How cute! I'd be worried they might burn themselves or worse, something else. Haha
Thank you :) The worries of a mother! :)
I love how she's right there, but lets them have their adventure!
Thank you :)
The only thing I would say is the use of 'one' when the child says they want 'one cookie'. It sounded a bit awkward and I think 'a cookie' would have worked better? Other than that I loved the mischief here!
Thank you. :) I had to stick to the given prompt and hence used the word 'one'. It had to be there between the words 'light' and 'candle' to qualify. And yes, a cookie sounds a lot better. :)