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With a deep sigh, Mike
turned his head away from the ice cream cart. His stomach growled. Mike
tightened his hands around the waist and looked at a group of children. They
were playing with a bright yellow ball. A smile formed on his dry lips. Trust
kids to bring a beach ball to a park, he thought warily.
The ball flew in his
direction and landed at his feet.
“Hide me, quick.” The ball
said in an urgent voice.
Mike raised an eyebrow.
“Don’t you see how those monsters are torturing me? Help me. I’ll help you.”
The ball offered.
Mike saw a kid walking in
his direction. He kicked the ball into the bushes beside the bench.
“Oww!”
“Shut up,” Mike muttered. The
kid asked if Mike saw the ball.
Mike shook his head. Dejected,
the kid ran back to his friends.
“So Mr. Yellow Ball, what do
we do now?” Mike asked amusement evident in his voice.
“Take me to your house. And
I’ll kill you if you kick me one more time.” The ball replied.
“Hmm… As you wish.” Mike
said. He looked around and spotted a paper bag. He placed the ball into the bag
and walked away from the park.
“Not bad, dude. You are a
good thief.” The ball teased.
“Yeah! I should have stolen
some food instead of you.” Mike retorted. He thought the ball was as good a
diversion from his grumbling stomach. Turning into a dirty alley, Mike stopped
in front of a rusty door.
He kicked the door closed
after stepping inside. “Eww! What is this lousy smell?” The ball asked.
“My home, yellow,” Mike replied.
He turned the bag to let the ball roll onto the muddy floor.
“Pick Me Up!” The ball
yelled. Mike laughed as he sat on the thin mattress.
“Idiot. Do you want my help
or not?” The ball thundered.
“What kind of help?” Mike
asked looking curious.
“I can make you rich. But
only if you treat me right.” The ball replied.
Mike grinned. He placed it
beside him on the bed and took out a lighter from his pocket.
He found the lighter in the
same bushes. It was a solid silver piece. Engraved on it was a strange symbol. Casually
he flicked it open. The flame danced.
“Noo! Throw that away. It will destroy me.”
The ball replied rolling to the edge of the bed.
“You are afraid of fire?”
Mike asked.
“Not fire. Only this cursed
thing. It is evil.” The ball replied in a shaking voice.
Mike shut it off and put it
aside. The ball breathed a sigh of relief.
“You are a good man. Now go
to sleep. You will wake up rich.” The ball ordered. It twirled thrice.
*****
The soft feathery bed felt
like heaven. Mike breathed in a faint fragrance of lily in his sleep. He opened
his eyes and found himself in a lavish room. He let out a low whistle. The ball
made him a rich man.
Mike stretched loving the
feel of silk on his rough skin. No wonder the rich went crazy about luxury, he
thought with a grin. He rang the bell that was beside his bed. A well-dressed
man walked in carrying a large tray of food. Mike ate until he thought his
stomach would burst.
Later in the day, Mike found
the ball sitting on the massive chair behind the study table.
“Thank you, yellow.” He said
in a warm voice.
The ball shrugged.
“Remember, none of this is permanent. If you let this get into your head and
ill-treat anybody, you will be back on the streets.”
As days passed on Mike began
to resent the ball. It gave him riches, but that did not mean it could dominate
him round the clock, Mike thought bitterly.
He remembered the lighter.
Mike found it under the pillow when he woke up that day. It was locked in his
safe. That night, Mike crept behind the ball. The flames from the lighter
engulfed the ball as it cried for help.
Mike walked away. The next
morning he woke up to find a rat racing on his leg. The foul smell of the
gutters made him puke. All he had was the silver lighter gripped in his left
hand.
This is a good first try at magic realism, Sri. Mike's resentment at the end of the story was believable and made for a surprising twist. His behavior filled out his character for me a bit. I feel like a thin rubber ball would pop before it would burn, so I'm thinking the burning was magical. If it was, I think the story could use a sentence or two acknowledging that.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Nathan. :)
DeleteAh yes. It was the magical kind. I should have said something to make it clear. Thanks for the tip.
I thought the magic ball might go another direction at first. My interest was piqued when the man turned out to be poor/homeless. He sure got his just deserts.
ReplyDeleteThis was a great first attempt at magical realism, and felt almost like a fable with a clear message. Mike's rise, and then his fall through greed and mistrust was well drawn and a reliable narrative arc. I feel like the story really got started once he had the lighter, and then it moved along quickly and naturally.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Asha. :)
DeleteI'm so glad you liked it.