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Wednesday, April 8, 2020

Gather the Leaves

Credit: Ratna Pochiraju 


Vibrant
Gathered around
A circle full of life
With no ending or beginning
Let’s live

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Note: The poem is written in Cinquain style with 2-4-6-8-2 syllables in each line respectively. 

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22 comments:

  1. Monika Suri April 8, 2020 at 10:23 AM

    Beautiful life in few words

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  2. Frédérique - Quilting Patchwork AppliquéApril 8, 2020 at 11:37 AM

    Oh I love it! Lovely poem, and nice rythm.

    F is for Free motion

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  3. JaiApril 8, 2020 at 12:34 PM

    My knowledge of the technical aspects of poetry is zilch. I just reel off verses as they come to my mind. That is a beautiful technically perfect poem you have written.

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    1. Srivalli RekhaApril 8, 2020 at 3:56 PM

      Thank you, Jai :) I have a special love for shape poetry. Just don't ask me to use meters though. I'm horrible at it.

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  4. Tomichan MatheikalApril 8, 2020 at 1:43 PM

    Leaves and life make good poetry.

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    1. Srivalli RekhaApril 8, 2020 at 3:57 PM

      They do, don't they? :D
      Thank you for reading, TM. :)

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  5. AnupriyaApril 8, 2020 at 3:47 PM

    Ok, the technicality of writing poems is Greek to me. But it was fun to check the syllable count for each line as mentioned by you in the note.

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    1. Srivalli RekhaApril 8, 2020 at 4:04 PM

      Haha... That's the fun part of these poems. The syllables can cause of quite a bit of trouble.
      Thank you for reading. :)

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  6. Prakash HegadeApril 8, 2020 at 6:36 PM

    This is short and full of life! :-)

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  7. Prakash HegadeApril 8, 2020 at 6:37 PM

    I am not sure why comment at times goes as Unknown.

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  8. Keith's RamblingsApril 8, 2020 at 7:16 PM

    Say no more.

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  9. AlpanaApril 8, 2020 at 10:16 PM

    wow..even in a full length article, I can't someup life in such a beautiful manner. Life is full of shades but there is no end...lets live is the notion for all.

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  10. Weekends in MaineApril 9, 2020 at 3:42 AM

    I like the way the first and last lines of the poem are so powerful. Weekends In Maine

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  11. Ira MishraApril 9, 2020 at 4:07 AM

    Profound and beautiful!!Describing the circle of life in just a few words....and I love the positivity:)

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  12. NamrathaApril 9, 2020 at 6:20 PM

    Beautiful cinquain! The painting and your poem captured the concept of life so well. Been meaning to find your AtoZ and landed here only today!

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  13. CRDApril 10, 2020 at 8:46 AM

    The poem is beautiful for its ability to give a message despite its simplicity.

    That painting though is surreal. WOW!!!

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