The image is taken from Google.
"Psst!"
"Hello, buddy!"
I greeted my friend up there.
"Mommy!"
"Daddy!"
He screeched. It hurt my ears.
"Honey, don't be afraid."
"Play with me."
I hoped he would be brave enough to reply.
"There is a monster under my bed."
"DO something!"
His wails got louder. I winced.
"Listen to me, kiddo."
"I won't hurt you. Stop jumping on my head."
I still tried to make him understand.
"My room is haunted!"
"The monster will EAT me!"
He danced hard on the bed. I was getting squished.
"Argh! Damn you!"
"I don't eat my friends."
I roared in anger. How dare he!
"Mommy!"
"Take it away."
He hollered. Why throw that round thingy at me when you are scared?
"Ouch!"
"Stop it!"
I cried in pain as my head hurt. I think I am dyin...g.
I like how fast-paced this was. I was a little confused who was saying what, though.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Nathan. The one in blue is by the kid. :)
DeleteThis was funny and cute.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Donnetta. I love your name :)
DeleteAww, poor little guy! (the monster, I mean! haha) Your pacing was well done, but like Nathan, I had a little trouble keeping up with who was speaking. I thought his mother was at one point too, but I think it was actually only the monster and the child, right? Anyway, I liked this. It was funny but also a bit tragic for the monster.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anna. :)
DeleteYes, it was the monster and the kid.
I wanted a different version of monster and hence the title too.