tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045047387541959147.post7697219639972938440..comments2024-03-29T18:45:29.019+05:30Comments on The Witchy Storyteller: Ode to Salt WatersSrivalli Rekhahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01102719458284096665noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045047387541959147.post-76445099167066544062018-05-31T10:20:25.801+05:302018-05-31T10:20:25.801+05:30Thank yo so much. :)
That's a nice name for a...Thank yo so much. :) <br />That's a nice name for a blog. ;) Srivalli Rekhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01102719458284096665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045047387541959147.post-8107778589527579942018-05-31T09:24:48.153+05:302018-05-31T09:24:48.153+05:30I absolutely loved the way you ended each stanza, ...I absolutely loved the way you ended each stanza, I think your wanted effect by ending them all with similar effect really worked. At least it did on me. coffeeandcigaretteshttps://coffeeandcigarettes.blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045047387541959147.post-25208504094990432812018-05-30T10:30:30.684+05:302018-05-30T10:30:30.684+05:30Thank you so much, Nathan. :)
Yes, I put it throu...Thank you so much, Nathan. :) <br />Yes, I put it through a syllable counter I found online and made changes. <br />The plan was to end each stanza with similar effect (chasm, void, abyss). I thought it'd be dramatic. Srivalli Rekhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01102719458284096665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045047387541959147.post-54966783876136103032018-05-30T10:28:10.130+05:302018-05-30T10:28:10.130+05:30Thank you so much, Synna. I am sure you can. Go fo...Thank you so much, Synna. I am sure you can. Go for it. :) Srivalli Rekhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01102719458284096665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045047387541959147.post-54959122719779394682018-05-29T21:57:46.777+05:302018-05-29T21:57:46.777+05:30I love the morose tone you've set. It's ve...I love the morose tone you've set. It's very Edgar Allen Poe. There are a few lines that aren't hitting 11 syllables by my count. The line "with nothing but void" succeeds in restating an idea from the previous stanza, but doesn't really add anything new to the piece.Natehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18384393756139118870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045047387541959147.post-13482667374863507382018-05-29T17:21:32.813+05:302018-05-29T17:21:32.813+05:30Chilling. Well done. I wish I could write as artfu...Chilling. Well done. I wish I could write as artfully as that. Synnahttp://synna.netnoreply@blogger.com