tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045047387541959147.post5570735498195018603..comments2024-03-28T20:57:23.855+05:30Comments on The Witchy Storyteller: The New RoomSrivalli Rekhahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01102719458284096665noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045047387541959147.post-24663674565820220342018-05-06T10:42:09.644+05:302018-05-06T10:42:09.644+05:30Thank you. :) Thank you. :) Srivalli Rekhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01102719458284096665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045047387541959147.post-46943360107757644052018-05-06T08:27:37.887+05:302018-05-06T08:27:37.887+05:30You conveyed anticipation very well. You conveyed anticipation very well. unfoldingfromthefog.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00342996642088972491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045047387541959147.post-20628769013520350712018-05-04T10:27:53.280+05:302018-05-04T10:27:53.280+05:30Thank you, Nathan. I do seem to be falling into th...Thank you, Nathan. I do seem to be falling into the cliches trap! I definitely need to work on that. Srivalli Rekhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01102719458284096665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1045047387541959147.post-20775476194609842902018-05-03T22:04:12.321+05:302018-05-03T22:04:12.321+05:30I liked how elements of nature reminded her of her...I liked how elements of nature reminded her of her future with her child and how the furnishings bought awaited the baby just as excitedly as the narrator. There are a few phrases that fall into cliche, for instance, "a precious bundle of joy" and "put a blush on my cheeks."Natehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18384393756139118870noreply@blogger.com